Judge Pascale Petit’s comments: “This poem creates its own world. It made a deep impression on me from the first reading. It’s utterly magical yet I am convinced of its reality, that something important is being vividly communicated. All the senses are employed to persuade me that the emotional heart is true. I can smell and taste it, hear the poem’s heartbeat. It’s hard to write well about sex but this accomplished, elemental fairytale has a considerable erotic charge. The surprise ending adds an extra edge to the intense love affair and mention of a white Juliet cap and veil keep us anchored in the human despite the wolf persona. The language is taut, lush and has a consistent, lulling rhythm. I love ‘the sleep of trees’ and ‘The moon clamped // its yellow tooth into my shoulder. I took the whole / night inside’ which draw me even further under the poem’s spell.”