| InterBoard Poetry Competition | |
| Second Place Winner, January 2009 | |
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FIRST FROST Christopher T. George (FreeWrights Peer Review) A last ochre magnolia leaf twitches like the index finger of a dying man; under the ginkgo, yellow leaves spread & all the birds are in motion, swooping, diving: robins, starlings, cardinals, a brace of cheeky blue jays—o one vaults into the magnolia like a trapeze artiste and devours a bud. Comments by judge Elena Karina Byrne: “‘First Frost’ is a Buddhist-like, automatopoetic polaroid view of nature, targeting our vulnerability of perennial-impermanence where a magnolia leaf ‘twitches like the index finger of a dying man.’ The use of assonance and subtle end rhyme keep the poem beautifully close-fisted, bud-like, ready to be devoured.”
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