| InterBoard Poetry Competition | |
| Second Place Winner, March 2008 | |
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BITCH Carla Martin-Wood (The Critical Poet) Whatever poison runs through the veins of wolves that draws them to some solitary place, there to howl in altercation with the moon, runs burning through my veins tonight, and restless, sweating, I rise and pace this carpeted wilderness, these rooms grown strange. How many times have we mated on nights like this, rain beating like the frantic hands of a jealous wife against the windows? How many nights have you fed my craving, a mad thing wild and tangled with tears and earth come crying in from the woods? How many years have I let you hide your anger and your grief inside me? I have learned so well how easily one passion is spent in another. And is this love that gorges itself, then slips to some cave apart to gnaw the bones of memory, till it grows lean and hungry once more? I write this under a hunter’s moon, the years baying behind me like a pack of hounds. Judge Fleda Brown’s comments: “This poem lives up to its fierce title. It moves flawlessly into the craving, the mad passion that ‘gorges itself, / and then slips to some cave apart / to gnaw the bones of memory.’ I am in the presence here of pure energy, no blunder of language in the way between us. I love ‘rain beating / like the frantic hands of a jealous wife,’ which may inform the poem, leaves us to guess that it does. Then the last stanza, which pulls us out of the immediate, tells us this passion is long past, but not at all, really. It’s after the speaker ‘like a pack of hounds.’ What apt metaphors!”
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