| InterBoard Poetry Competition | |
| Third Place Winner, March 2009 | |
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DOUBLE VISION Susan B. McDonough (Blueline Poetry Forum) “Only after the last tree has been cut down, Only after the last river has been poisoned, Only after the last fish has been caught, Only then will you find money cannot be eaten.” ~ Cree prophecy The forest looks for its branches, bark removed, smooth edges chase ridges. Empty air. Stumps settled; discs waiting on a checker board asleep on a mossy forest floor. The river a sleepy serpent: a trail of exploitation and corruption. Well wishers float on their backs fore-cast in a logger’s chagrin. Skeletons lock arms heading beyond waterfall’s roar past a bend where only mud will swim. Iridescent fish are slipped inside already thick pockets. Eyes that can’t rest remain suspended, weighty; a watch hung from a chain. It tic tocs through the 70’s, 80’s 90’s… The water continues to rise and fall without pomp and circumstance until it bleeds opaque; so thick that we cannot find our feet. Comments by judge Elena Karina Byrne: “Pollution and deforestation, this poem’s overall important theme thickens in our veins where, really ‘only mud will swim’ with Rachel Carson’s ghost. The lines ‘Well-wishers float on their backs / fore-cast in a logger’s chagrin’ and ‘iridescent fish are slipped inside / already thick pockets,’ using assonance and internal rhyme, musically target the poem’s underlying tone. Image for image, the importance of this geo-political idea successfully veers from didacticism.”
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