| InterBoard Poetry Competition | |
GUERNICA BY PICASSO
Christopher T. George
(Desert Moon Review)
Even after all these years, the women are still screaming,
fingers transmuted into sausages or sardines
that wont stop the babies from falling.
Body parts mix with those of bull and stallion:
eyes flared, hooves, horns, teeth, faces ripped in two.
The bellows of animals become human.
Judge Mark Yakichs comment: Short poems are difficult to pull off because they every word counts. I realize that sounds silly since in all poems every word should count, but youd be surprised how often that doesnt happen. In this poem, the penultimate line is a bit received but I can forgive that because of the fingers as sardines. I suppose I also like this poem because it is timely and because Picassos painting still resonates after all these years. One last thing: the first line of this poem works because its true and not true at the same time. I apologize that my commentary is longer than the poem.

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3rd Place Winner, April 2003

