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Second Place Winner, July 2006
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MORATORIUM
      J.S. Lange
      (About Poetry Forum)

Cesar Pasquel stopped
using words one day.
He removed them from his vocabulary,
aardvark to zygote, one by one
until there were none.

Gestures went next.
No waves goodbye,
no shrugs, no handshakes.
Slumped shoulders and downcast eyes
became status quo.

Cesar cut off his left foot
one idle Tuesday, and then the right.
He cooked them over a spit,
ate them with a side
of regret and solitude.

The legs went Wednesday, then his torso,
then the arms. Soon he was
a severed head with two perfect
hands hovering nearby,
marred only by neglect.

The last time I saw Cesar
he picked up his head and set it
in the middle of his kitchen table,
a centerpiece of sunken eyes
and hanging jowls.

He closed his eyes,
a sigh barely audible from
his dry, cracked lips.
We passed the wine and bread
without looking.

Judge Tree Riesener’s comments: “We go right along with this author from a commonplace beginning (becoming silent -- who doesn’t sometimes) into a surreal world and finally into an open-ended theological comment. This is a poem that seems to be grounded in a real person but perhaps in the end can best be seen as commentary on the human condition. The clear, almost journalistic vocabulary uses the only type of words appropriate for description of such incapacity, whether from inward lack of decision or from the gradual diminution of human ability in a politically mad world.”

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