Judge Deborah Bogen’s comments: “A poem explaining what Heaven (with a capital H) is that uses a decidedly pagan imagery many would think is opposed to heavenly values is immediately interesting--the poet has something he or she is really thinking about. And this poem makes its inquiry via complicated linguistic turns that add to its complexity, e.g., ’Here, redwoods appear in clusters; gods grow upon gods, / between gods, within gods...’ This profusion of little-g gods whose referent is clearly vegetative growth tempts us then to re-read the poem as more pagan. But the poet does not allow this simplification, closing with ‘I remember you from my youth, Lord. / I remember you from a childlike dream.’”